An article of mine: Davies pleads for fan power as Promised Land beckons

temp101

Youth Team
Hi all,

I am currently having vague thoughts of pursing a career in sports journalism and would be interested to see what everyone thinks of this article which I've just knocked up this morning.

Let me know about what I've written (ie. am I just talking shit) and don't worry about slating it if you so wish - all comments will be appreciated!

Oh, and of course, U REDDSSS for today!

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Davies pleads for fan power as Promised Land beckons


Billy Davies knew when he took over at the City Ground 14 months ago that winning over the Nottingham Forest faithful would be one of, if not his greatest, challenges. However, having guided The Reds to 3rd place in the Championship prior to their match against Preston today and a more than genuine chance of promotion, Davies now feels that he, and his team, have earned the right to be cheered over the finish line during the final 11 games, whatever that may constitute.

The Scotsman does not underestimate the power of the Forest fan base and realises that they can play a key part in potentially catapulting the team to the Premiership this term. Although a poor run of results was the main catalyst that put the noose around the necks of Messrs Kinnear, Megson and Calderwood, it was ultimately fan pressure that forced Chairman Nigel Doughty’s hand to open the trapdoor.

With Forest sitting 22nd in the league, the challenge that faced Davies on his appointment was no mean feat. However, it is one that he has indisputably succeeded at to-date. Tasked with initially saving a side careering towards relegation straight back to the wastelands of the third tier, he has managed to turn around Forest’s fortunes in a significantly shorter timeframe that probably even he expected.

He has built a team that has far exceeded pre-season predictions, containing a potent blend of grit and determination in the form of re-born stalwart Wes Morgan and captain Paul McKenna, along with a healthy dose of flair in players such as Radowslaw Majewski, Paul Anderson and the recently-arrived George Boyd. Make no mistake, this is now Davies’ team and cynics may observe that this can also be seen in the gainsmanship displayed by goalkeeper Lee Camp and defender Chris Gunter on a more regular basis than frustrated opposition fans would like to see. These players reflect Davies’ overall ethos – win at all costs, make friends later. The fact that Forest have actually gone about this business this season with more style than could be previously expected from a ‘Billy Davies team’ is probably seen as an added bonus to the diminutive Glaswegian.

Although Forest’s transformation this season has been remarkable, to look at Billy Davies is to look at a man who appears to be almost constantly at odds with the world. Despite overseeing the largest net spend in the Football League during his time at Forest, regular snipes in relation to the club’s inability to bring in even more players have become a common theme. In the current economic climate, this could be compared to a disillusioned child asking his parents at Christmas why the bicycle they have given him not a Harley Davidson. He is always wanting more, a point which is not lost on most fans and arguably provides the greatest source of hope in relation to the club’s future. With Davies in charge and a Chairman seemingly willing to do what it takes financially to facilitate a return to the top flight, as promised in the wake of the club’s promotion from League 1 in 2008, the relatively recent nadir of Playoff capitulation against lowly Yeovil Town now seems a distant memory for most fans.

Davies’ insistence that the Forest faithful have a big part to play in the club’s fortunes should only increase his stock further. Often seen as isolated and distant, he is now slowly immersing himself in a club that feels it deserves another shot at the big time and wants a man of his conviction at the helm to take them there. False prophets are not welcome on the banks of the Trent after recent dawns have failed to materialise.

Even if it doesn’t occur this season, guiding the twice-European Cup winners to the Premiership and, equally importantly, keeping them there, may just earn him a place in the hearts of Forest fans, many of whom derided the decision to bring in an ex-Derby County manager of abrasive nature. However, it could be correctly observed that Forest’s fortunes did not suffer too badly the last time that happened and whilst the man who famously proclaimed that he ‘might not have been the best manager in the business, but was in the top one’ will always occupy top spot, there may just be scope for Brian Clough to have a number two if Forest’s progress under Davies continues at its current pace. Now that would be a management team.
 

Clifford

Viv Anderson
Interesting read. You seem a bit obsessed with the comma. Your last paragraph for example is mostly made up of two sentences. You almost feel out of breath reading it. A lot of it you should be using a full stop and a new sentence.

Other than that it's pretty good.
 

Jonathan

Resident foodie!
Good luck getting a job. That's all I can say.

By the way, that's not me criticising your writing. There are absolutely no jobs around at the moment in sport journalism.

Plus, if you work for a newspaper you'll need to pay shitloads of money out to gain an NCTJ qualification and learn shorthand to at least 100-words-per-minute.

Good luck, though!
 

Rich

Rice IV
How old are you temp101?

Some grammatical mistakes there, but the seed of being able to write well is clearly there.

I'd suggest speaking to Jman or Dellaroc (although Dellaroc isn't currently around).
 

weasel

Grenville Morris
You've clearly got a talent for writing so stick at it I say.

Like me though you seem to end up putting more commas into a sentence than you should, which I've always attributed to being especially intelligent :D. That will probably need tweaking in order to write in a journalistic style, but that's the easy part. Having the vocabulary and natural flair is the hard bit, which you have.

It's an extremely competitive business though, so if you want to get ahead you should keep up a blog or contribute to LTLF or something to put down on your CV and show your passion for sports reporting. Get ahead of the pack as it were.
 

Jonathan

Resident foodie!
Sorry if my last post sounded a bit blunt. I've read it again and I enjoyed it.

Just to explain myself from before, I'm a third-year student - soon to graduate from a Sport Journalism course. I'm looking at getting a 2:1 when I leave which is pretty good I guess.

I've also got the NCTJ qualifications in Law (court and general reporting), Local and Central Government, Newswriting and shorthand. To work for a newspaper at any level, you'll need at least 80wpm shorthand and in many places 100. They won't even consider anyone with less than 80.

I'd recommend to you - depending on your age - going to a journalism college like the one in Harlow (I think) rather than to uni. You're never too old, and you're also not there as long as with uni and it's all focused on journalism rather than academic essays. I'd have done that if I could go back three years.

Also, get your name anywhere and everywhere. Do work experience whenever you can and treat yourself as a freelance journalist. Most importantly, try and spread your wings. Don't just stick with football. Familiarise yourself with other sports you have had no interest before - I knew nothing about certain sports when I started uni, but now could probably write about football, tennis, cricket, rugby union, formula one and boxing with relative ease.

This might sound daft as well, but get yourself a decent email address. Use a Yahoo, AOL, Googlemail etc. with your name and, if necessary, a number or two. People will take you a lot more seriously than if your email address was hotbody_08@hotmail.com...

I'm not qualified yet, but I do the odd bit of freelance stuff and have some work for the World Cup lined up that I'll be getting paid for. I graduate in June, but probably won't be able to get a job until the autumn and even that would be good going.

Another person to talk to on here is Brolin. I believe he graduated last year as a journalist.
 

Jonathan

Resident foodie!
Oh yeah, write a blog and contribute to free sites like this one. It'll only help.

Even if people don't read your blog, it keeps your journalistic mind working!
 

Brolin

Swedish Meatball
Not sure there's much I can add to Jonathan's guide on how to get into journalism, and also his cynacism about the job market.

Whenever people have asked me about journalism I have told them to think very carefully about it. It doesn't pay well, it's not very glamorous and the hours can be ungodly. But you do get to work with words and people, so your job can be rewarding and sometimes fun.

If you're confident that it is the direction you want to take your career then, depending on how old you are, follow Jonathan's advice. If you're of an age where you are yet to or thinking about going to university, I would still recommend that.

I accept NCTJ courses such as the one in Harlow Jonathan dropped in are very good and everything you do will be geared towards being a better journalist. A good number of employers prefer people who have qualified through these courses. Yet university is a good life experience and if you get good lecturers, they can pass on a lot of wisdom and contacts. I would also say if you find that journalism isn't for you, you are in a better position to turn your hand to something else with a degree on your CV.

Again, I agree with Jonathan about getting as much work experience under your belt as possible. Be absolutely shameless in your enthusiasm and approach the smaller papers in your area, because they are more likely to let you do more.

You obviously know enough about football, so I wouldn't let that be a concern. I don't want to preach about how to write because I have so many bad habits of my own, but I would say just to keep it simple and never write a word that you would feel uncomfortable saying aloud.
 

Cooky

Rice 21
Yep verything that Jonathan and Brolin have said.

Really enjoyed reading that, it flowed well for the most part. Best of luck in the job hunt, I know how tough it is out there!
 

temp101

Youth Team
How old are you temp101?

26.

Thanks a lot for all the comments and advice that everyone has posted - especially regarding the practicalities of it as a career option.

I actually graduated from Nottingham Trent with a 2.1 (no one got a 1st on our course) in Business Information Systems in 2006 and have had some decent jobs since, but writing has always been in the back of my mind as something that I might want to do.

I think I need to do a bit more research into what options/paths are available, but it is certainly something I enjoy doing.

If anybody has another couple of mins spare and fancies a read, I knocked up another one after the Preston game...

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Innocence of youth may prove to be deciding factor, suggests Davies


Billy Davies has been informing anyone within earshot this season that his Nottingham Forest side are not yet ready for promotion from the Championship. Whilst the fight back in their eventual 3-2 defeat to Preston North End yesterday was spirited, the opening 32 minutes at Deepdale certainly provided Davies with more ammunition for his argument.

The Scotsman suggested in his post-match interview that Forest’s shambolic start to the match could be directly attributed to the attitude that he saw in his playing staff during the warm-up. He felt that his charges were not fully prepared for the energy and fight that his former club displayed during a torrid opening third of the game for The Reds. It is not clear whether the biggest influence on the 3-0 half-time score line was the attitude of his side or the application and verve of Preston, but Davies’ assessment that his side’s performance before the break was wholly unacceptable seems a reasonable one, especially considering Forest started the day a full 20 points ahead of the Lancastrians.

Despite the fact that they still sit 3rd in the table, these are unsettling times for Forest. No-one inside the club or in the stands would deny that, after 36 games, this season has been a success. However, with the prospect of automatic promotion fading fast, there is now a marked change in mood from the euphoria and fearlessness that could be found on the terraces a couple of months ago. Whether his playing staff can cope with this change is Davies’ main concern.

With yesterday’s result against Preston representing his side’s fifth straight away league defeat, the invincibility away from the City Ground that Forest had built up during an incredible unbeaten run stretching back to March last year seems a relatively distant memory. What has kept Forest’s hopes of automatic promotion to the Premiership alive is a refusal to let their troubles away from home affect performances in front of their own fans.

Entertaining an increasingly partisan City Ground crowd with the sleek, incisive passing football that has been a hallmark of Forest under Davies this season has still come relatively easy to his players. Although the earlier drubbings of Doncaster, Leicester and Preston have been replaced with victories by a solitary goal in the last four matches Trentside, the expansive, luscious pitch that has suited Forest’s style so well this term has still overseen a club-record run of ten successive victories. However, Davies indicates that the inexperience of his squad is the main driving force behind their inability to transfer this style of play to the significantly less well-kept surfaces of The Ricoh Arena, Pride Park and Deepdale in recent weeks.

Davies knows what it takes to get a side up from the Championship. Arguably more pertinently though, he has also gained first-hand experience of fulfilling one of football’s most infuriating clichés - ‘getting promoted too early’. You suspect that whilst he will eternally claim mitigating circumstances were present if and when his part in Derby’s ultimate humiliation in the 2007-08 Premiership season is dredged up, he still feels he has a score to settle at the top level of English football. He rightly sees a genuine chance to achieve this with Forest, but the wariness that has led to his ‘not ready’ mantra this season is clear for all to see. He senses that the same fate of Derby’s 11-point contribution to the record books could befall Forest if the immaturity of his squad is not addressed.

The simple fact that Davies has chosen to be fairly critical of his young squad since their unbeaten run ended, should however fill fans with hope rather than apprehension. One of the major criticisms levelled at managerial victims Kinnear, Megson and Calderwood was their unwillingness to challenge and change unproductive traits that were present in their respective squads. For too many years prior to Davies’ arrival, deficiencies at the City Ground have been shrouded in secrecy, or simply ignored; only brought to bear when it has ultimately been too late. Billy Davies can see immense potential in his current squad, but still clearly feels that there are significant areas of improvement to address. That he has decided to discuss this in a refreshingly open manner should provide the Forest faithful with optimism for the future of the club, something which has been in short supply prior in recent years on the banks of the Trent.

Regarding this season though, the disparity between Forest’s home and away form will need to be addressed if they still harbour any aspirations of promotion, either automatically or via the Playoffs. Whether Davies truly feels that this is the most suitable season for Forest to achieve that, may however be a mystery that remains unsolved.
 

temp101

Youth Team
Just thought I'd give this a shameless bump.

If anyone has a couple of mins to read my second offering and maybe provide comments, that would be great.

If not, cool.

U REDDSSS!!!
 
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